Welcome to Snippet Sunday on Darkling Dreams!
Where writers come together to share a few sentences (8-10) of their current project — whether it’s a recently released novel, a WIP (work in progress), or an older manuscript that’s being revived. Intended to hook readers, gather feedback and build an author’s fan base, Snippet Sunday is the FB group that does all three.
Welcome to October! The month of everything pumpkin flavored and spooky! In other words, my favorite month of the year. In honor of it being Halloween month, I am going to switch up my Sunday Snippets and share from a different story of mine that I also have on Wattpad. A short horror story titled, The Beast.
This starts a couple paragraphs into the beginning of the story.
(Some sentences may have been creatively punctuated to fit the ten sentence limit. Though I’ll confess, I’m one or two sentences over. My bad.)
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I’d never seen the beast in full view, and I was sure I didn’t want to: the snatches of him I had seen as he danced around my vision limits, tormenting my mind with his games of keeping me on the brink of breaking, were enough to instill fear into the bravest of souls.
He was hideous.
A huge, hulking mass of black; I wasn’t sure if it was fur or some sort of a sticky, black tar hide that covered his body, but I wasn’t keen to finding out. Claws and razor sharp teeth too big for any animal alive would glint in the moonlight as he would fade once more into the night.
And his breath… It was like rotting flesh; hot and pungent when he would stand just behind me, the tip of his teeth lightly grazing the back of my neck as he tormented me again, and again, and again.
But it was his eyes that had first chilled me to my core and frozen my blood.
They were a golden yellow, bright and intensified in the darkness of night, black slits like a cat formed the pupil of his eye. They were unforgiving and glinted maliciously. One look at them would tell you all you needed to know about the creature they belonged to.
You didn’t want to run into this monster at night, or at all for that matter.
Time and time again though, that was exactly what happened to me.
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If you wish to read more, it is available to read on Wattpad! (If you do, it is under the book titled Wild Fantasies. This was part of a contest I entered.) I love to hear any and all feedback on my work as well. Comments are greatly appreciated, as are the reads.
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Fantastic beginning! I am hooked. Dang, that was a good description!
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That makes me happy. :) There’ll be more of The Beast for the rest of October, but it’s always on Wattpad if you can’t wait.
Thanks for reading, Teresa! :)
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Oh my, I don’t think I am going off to bed anytime soon, this was defintely scary. Terrific descriptions, great snippet.
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Whoops. Sorry. You might want to brace yourself for the rest of the story then. LOL.
Thanks for reading, Chelle! :)
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If it wasn’t so late (and I wasn’t so tired) I’d go make some popcorn and kick back and read this on Wattpad. Alas, the popcorn and the reading will have to wait for another day (although now I really want popcorn).
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:) You are awesome. I’ve told you that before, haven’t I? No? Well, now I’ve told you. Sadness to being tired (hope you sleep well) but you made me happy to hear just one snippet and you want to read.
(And I’ll have you know you just made ME hungry now. LOL)
Thanks for reading, P.T.! :)
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That’s scary. I don7t want to meet that beast either.
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No you really don’t.
Thanks for reading, Linda! :)
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Oooh, spooky. Great for October. Nice snippet, Daelyn. :)
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It’ll be a spooky one all month from me.
Thanks for reading, Siobhan! :)
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Wow, is that ever a great snippet for Halloween-time! So spooky and the description was so vivid – all the details built up to an unforgettable image. Loved the way the eyes glowed. Loved the excerpt!
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XD I’m trilled by that. Thanks so much! They’ll be more of him, and spooks, for the rest of the month.
Thanks for reading, Veronica! :)
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You hit the right balance with this bit– enough detail to make it very real but still vague enough to let one’s imagination paint the scariest picture…
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Glad you’re liking it. It’ll get better.
Thanks for reading, Jeff! :)
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