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Where writers come together to share a few sentences (8-10) of their current project — whether it’s a recently released novel, a WIP (work in progress), or an older manuscript that’s being revived. Intended to hook readers, gather feedback and build an author’s fan base, Snippet Sunday is the FB group that does all three.
The madness that is the first Camp NaNoWriMo of 2017 has begun! Who else has plunged into the madness with me? I’m spending the month FINISHING Fated to Darkness and then using the remaining words of the month to work on Clockwork Heart. The tentative plan I would like to do is finish and publish Clockwork Heart this year. Since I’m hitting a point in FtD that I don’t really want to share from it anymore, I’m going to jump back to sharing from Clockwork Heart this month. Part of my motivation to finish the short story/novella/whatever it ends up being. This story is a steampunk, fantasy, modern-cross kind of genre. It’s still a WiP and I only have the first chapter completed – so far – so please excuse an errors and suggestions are welcome.
This week’s excerpt picks up right where I left off in last week’s snippet. For the purpose of reminding what they were talking about, this was Lavinia’s last line: “Then maybe you are not lost enough to find the charm.”
And now for the fourth peek at Chapter 1…
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His gaze turned up to search her face. This time she could not determine what classified emotion was flitting across his expression. Whatever it be, it was intense.
“Perhaps you’re right…”
Lavinia’s eyes whirred silently within their sockets as she studied him, wishing she could determine what he was thinking, or feeling. Such foreign concepts were beyond her capacity to understand though. That was not the way of a mechinel. Silence hung between them in which she could detect the faint rhythmic clicking of her heart tinkering away in her chest.
“Eric?” She finally broke the silence, computers spinning with questions.
“Hmm?” he mumbled as he fell back to lay in the grass once more.
“Were you…close to your mother?”
The question must have caught him off guard for his body stilled. A brief moment passed in which he remained silent and plucked another flower from the grass, inspecting it carefully. What he was looking for within its petals was beyond her. It was just a flower.
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Anyone care to guess what his answer is going to be to that question?
Due to the fact this is a new WiP, I do not have a cover or blurb yet, neither is it posted to Wattpad at this time. So there will be no “if you wish to read more…”
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… but flowers are always a nice distraction … great snippet. liked it.
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Flowers are a nice distraction, but Lav doesn’t understand that. Thanks, Iris.
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I’ve joined the madness, and today I got a good amount of work done. Nice writing, I liked it =)
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Woohoo! Welcome to the madness! It’s much fun. XD Thank you for commenting, I’m glad you liked it.
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It’s madness that’s getting me motivated to write, so it’s all good. You’re welcome!
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Same here. I write more in NaNo months than I do the other 9 months combined I’m pretty sure. Least in past years. I’m trying to be better this year about it.
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Nice descriptions–I wonder what he’s looking for. Like the line “computers spinning with questions.” Maybe that’s why my computer is acting up this morning.
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I’m not sure he knows what he’s looking for within that flower. Thanks for stopping by.
And uh oh, computers giving you trouble? I think you can thank Mercury’s Retrograde just starting today for that issue. Hope it sorts itself out!
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I like the description of her mechanism and thoughts.
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:) Thank you, Aurora!
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The flower is a distraction as he tries to not answer the question. I’m curious to know why he seems reluctant to do so.
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Come back next week and you might just find out why he’s hesitating. Thanks for reading, Karen.
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I think he’s not quite sure of the answer to the question.
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Okay, okay, I can see where you might interpret that. Thanks, P.T.
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Interesting to see the world through her eyes. Great scene.
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I love writing the world through her eyes, it’s so much fun, and such a different perspective. Thanks, Jennifer!
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